Steve-O Posted April 1, 2004 Share Posted April 1, 2004 I love the edit and the colors you used in the edit! I think the Thrashers, Preds or Flames colors really do work. Try the overlap and then I'll be totally happy! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nitroseed Posted April 1, 2004 Share Posted April 1, 2004 Okay, I tried something a little different... made a couple of minor changes to it, and I think it helps a little bit. Let's see what you guys think:Basically, I enlarged the comet and the big C, removed the motion streaks from the C, and faded the greyish border into the blue streaks coming from the back of the C. Also added some new streaks to the comet. I think it looks really good on a blue background, personally. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
webdav Posted April 2, 2004 Share Posted April 2, 2004 I think it looks really good on a blue background, personally. As long as it's not black, right Brad... uh... Jen... ummm Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aengre Posted April 2, 2004 Share Posted April 2, 2004 I really like that final concept, nitro. I never confused it with anything other than Comets, but going into each logo, I knew it was that, so that might've helped. Absolutely stunning work. [AD - NCFA] Arctic University Kodiaks (5-1-0, CONF 0-0-0)[Owner - NABA] Arctic Menace (18-12)Copying JQK and CC Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
winters in buffalo Posted April 2, 2004 Share Posted April 2, 2004 I'm not sure these edits are any better than the original. I guess the larger comet adds something, but I still think the original is great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
paynomind Posted April 2, 2004 Share Posted April 2, 2004 Somewhere in the background, one can hear the the barely audible sounds of the "over-edit" alarm going off.I liked it at the top of this page, and less so towards the bottom.I also like the Flames colors, which I think are;- More true to their original palate- More to to the current concept of the 'comet'- Less incorporating of the other colors in the leagueBy the way, Jen... I like it black, too! NCFA Sunset Beach Tech - Octopi  ΓΔΒ!  Going to college gets you closer to the real world, kind of like climbing a tree gets you closer to the moon. "...a nice illustration of what you get when skill, talent, and precedent are deducted from 'creativity.' " - James Howard Kunstler Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nitroseed Posted April 2, 2004 Share Posted April 2, 2004 I don't quite hear the over-edit alarm just yet. There may be a few VERY MINOR things left to touch up, but I think it's been tuned up pretty nicely. I am very happy with the final result of this concept, and I think it's a much cleaner, much simpler and much smoother design than the original. I went back and redid this concept in the Flames colors because, yes, the original idea was to match (or at least closely so) their current colors. Here is what it looks like (both red-dominant and yellow-dominant):Now, let me explain WHY I think this is better than the original version.The C, which has been enlarged and cleaned up, is much more legible. After removing the streaks, I felt that they were unnecessary and only added to the busyness of the logo as a whole. I feel that the word "Comets" is more legible this way as well, which was a concern with some others, as well as myself.The new "slickness" that comes as a result of cleaning up a lot of the needless streaks gives it a sleeker, more "spacey" and somewhat futuristic feel. I was very pleased with how the yellow/red outline fading into the main black color translated onto a black background. It gives it a unique look, while again adding to the smoothness and simplicity of it.I feel like the crest itself has become much simpler and easier to look at, especially on a black background (and even moreso on a jersey). This has more of an actual "logo" feel to me, personally, than the previous versions. I don't know why for sure, but that's a personal opinion.Either way, my opinion is that this latest version is a more effective and cleaner version and would work a lot better in the grand scheme of things. I'd be glad to hear out anyone as to why they think the original would be more effective. I'm always open to constructive criticism and debate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phil Posted April 2, 2004 Share Posted April 2, 2004 Again, the red outlined version rocks, I'd just increase the size of the "mets" and "Mohawk Valley" portions. Also I'd get rid of the curve at the bottom right of the C logos... starts to look ever so slightly like a G, and if it's so easy to resolve, why not? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sterling84 Posted April 2, 2004 Share Posted April 2, 2004 My good lord this is good.I love it.Sign a brutha up! The Official Cheese-Filled Snack of NASCAR Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cuss16 Posted April 2, 2004 Share Posted April 2, 2004 I also think the red outlined version is the best. Doh! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grish Posted April 2, 2004 Share Posted April 2, 2004 Nitro,About making the "C" the actual trail and logo with the same "trail" affect. just an idea. "Try not to have a good time ... This is supposed to be educational."- Charles Schulz Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brian in Boston Posted April 3, 2004 Share Posted April 3, 2004 nitro...My previous color preferences stand, but I do like these latest edits the best. PHENOMENAL work!Brian in Boston Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KCScout76 Posted April 3, 2004 Share Posted April 3, 2004 IMO - I like the puck going behind the "C" , it looks cleaner. All of them are very good Nitro!  Kansas City Scouts (CHL) Orr Cup Champions 2010, 2019, 2021     St. Joseph Pony Express (ULL)  2023 Champions   Kansas City Cattle (CL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
winters in buffalo Posted April 3, 2004 Share Posted April 3, 2004 No, no... I think the comet gets lost behind the C. It needs to be out in front. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BombSkwad Posted April 3, 2004 Share Posted April 3, 2004 OK... just threw together two designs, both on Calgary Home jerseys...I didn't put shoulder patches on the "C" jersey, simply for the sake of saving repitition. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
winters in buffalo Posted April 3, 2004 Share Posted April 3, 2004 You know what this would look good on? The old Canucks' jerseys. I'm pretty sure you can still get uncrested jerseys for a few of the older templates, so we might have more options than just the current sets. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joshawaggie Posted April 4, 2004 Share Posted April 4, 2004 I was thinkin that too winters. @josh_j12 CFA- Fargo Bobcats Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nitroseed Posted April 4, 2004 Share Posted April 4, 2004 Okay... here's the logo on the 'Nucks old jerseys: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joshawaggie Posted April 4, 2004 Share Posted April 4, 2004 i like, i like. @josh_j12 CFA- Fargo Bobcats Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
winters in buffalo Posted April 4, 2004 Share Posted April 4, 2004 I'm definitely feelin' these. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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