The Impaler Posted February 11, 2010 Share Posted February 11, 2010 I have to strongly disagree with you ESTONES6. I understand what you are saying and agree with the analogy not working on the Celtics et al. But the Pacers seem to be one of the exceptions. It seems to me that "Pacers" as a mascot specifically refers to the racing that Indy is known for. So I think this actually works in this concept.RE the car itself. I still think the front wheels look too big in relation to the back. Definitely think the inclusion of the partial wheel is an improvement. Also have to second the others opinions that the wordmark overshadows the car. Work on that and I think you have a winner. If you could make the wheels work as bball's that would be an added bonus. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
illwauk Posted February 11, 2010 Share Posted February 11, 2010 I like the goodyear idea. Or you could try to work a checkered flag type pattern into a stylized monogram. Even though I like Pacers as a regionally appropriate name, it's not the easiest thing to build an identity from. I give you props for even trying to take this one on... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bohob Posted February 11, 2010 Author Share Posted February 11, 2010 ANOTHER UPDATEHere is an option side-by-side with the previous version. I have separated the two pieces and arched the script. Improvement? NHL 2016 by Bowen Hobbs * BOHOB's MLB Redesign Project * MiLB Re-Brands * NCAA Football Concepts Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raysox Posted February 11, 2010 Share Posted February 11, 2010 The one thing that bugs me, is that a pacer is a horse racing term. So and Indy car would seem werid. But he logo itself is pretty good. @MichaelDanger19 | Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kbaker19 Posted February 11, 2010 Share Posted February 11, 2010 The one thing that bugs me, is that a pacer is a horse racing term. So and Indy car would seem werid. But he logo itself is pretty good.It's for both horse racing and the tradition of the Indy 500 Thanks Dolphins91 for the jersey avatars. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crashcarson15 Posted February 11, 2010 Share Posted February 11, 2010 Yeah, oh and ESTONE, the Indy Car is the symbol for Indianapolis. We're the only damn city in the world that cares about the IndyCar SeriesI like this bohob. Good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-kj Posted February 11, 2010 Share Posted February 11, 2010 I like the combined mark. Each part of it can still stand on its own.The front wheels are definitely out of proportion/perspective. While everything else is sloping down-left, the line between the top of the two sets of wheels is headed up-left. Buy some t-shirts and stuff at KJ Shop! KJ Branded | Behance portfolio POTD 2013-08-22 On 7/14/2012 at 2:20 AM, tajmccall said: When it comes to style, ya'll really should listen to Kev. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goforbroke Posted February 11, 2010 Share Posted February 11, 2010 Flip the car around to face right and that may help with the speed. To me, seeing it come in from the right and facing left makes it look like its coming in to park. Seeing in face right makes it look like its speeding past. Especially when paired with a wordmark that will of course be read left to right, if the car is coming right to left it negates the movement of the logo.This is really starting to come together Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrandMooreArt Posted February 11, 2010 Share Posted February 11, 2010 still dont like it. the perspective of the word mark and car still dosnt fit together, it looks akward. you're still using an F1 car which is primarily a European race car, the only US race they have is in Indy. i think you NEED to use an actual IRL Indy Car, but like i said, the body/chassis design is changing in 2012, so maybe an antique car could be best. (http://blogs.indianapolismotorspeedway.com/theexperience/files/2009/06/1911-marmon-wasp-on-track.JPG)the ball on the front of the car just looks like you're trying too hard to fit it in. dont try to force anything or tr to be too literal. i would do without the basketball all together GRAPHIC ARTIST BEHANCE / MEDIUM / DRIBBBLE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bohob Posted February 12, 2010 Author Share Posted February 12, 2010 UPDATE TIMEI made some adjustments to the car itself, including the front fender and wheel sizing. I also put basketballs on the rims on one version. There are two versions of the wordmark to choose from as well. Please let me know which car and which wordmark would work best. NHL 2016 by Bowen Hobbs * BOHOB's MLB Redesign Project * MiLB Re-Brands * NCAA Football Concepts Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gueman Posted February 12, 2010 Share Posted February 12, 2010 I love what you are trying to do. But do you need the entire car do make that statement. An Indy car has such a distinctive profile, perhaps less is more? And the basketballs on the wheels are a great addition. Giving money and power to government is like giving whiskey and car keys to teenage boys. P. J. O'Rourke Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goforbroke Posted February 12, 2010 Share Posted February 12, 2010 I still dont see enough movement from the car... and that being the case maybe you shouldn't try. Ditch the motion lines and put the VERY nicly rendered car inside a circle crest. that way you don't need as much movement. You can maybe have the bottom of the car sticking out... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kbaker19 Posted February 12, 2010 Share Posted February 12, 2010 I personally really like the one on the left. Car and wordmark. Thanks Dolphins91 for the jersey avatars. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Discrim Posted February 12, 2010 Share Posted February 12, 2010 I'm wondering what alt logos you have in mind A strong mind gets high off success, a weak mind gets high off bull Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brave-Bird 08 Posted February 12, 2010 Share Posted February 12, 2010 well, the basketball on the wheels is clever...but its not noticeable enough. i'd leave it off.this still doesnt look very "NBA" ish, but it doesnt matter, it's still awesome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bohob Posted February 15, 2010 Author Share Posted February 15, 2010 UPDATEHere's a version with an old car and a new car. C&C please. NHL 2016 by Bowen Hobbs * BOHOB's MLB Redesign Project * MiLB Re-Brands * NCAA Football Concepts Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crashcarson15 Posted February 15, 2010 Share Posted February 15, 2010 still dont like it. the perspective of the word mark and car still dosnt fit together, it looks akward. you're still using an F1 car which is primarily a European race car, the only US race they have is in Indy. i think you NEED to use an actual IRL Indy Car, but like i said, the body/chassis design is changing in 2012, so maybe an antique car could be best. (http://blogs.indianapolismotorspeedway.com/theexperience/files/2009/06/1911-marmon-wasp-on-track.JPG)the ball on the front of the car just looks like you're trying too hard to fit it in. dont try to force anything or tr to be too literal. i would do without the basketball all togetherWe lost that like, 3 years ago I think.Anyways, like the front on/original car more than the other. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrandMooreArt Posted February 15, 2010 Share Posted February 15, 2010 still dont like it. the perspective of the word mark and car still dosnt fit together, it looks akward. you're still using an F1 car which is primarily a European race car, the only US race they have is in Indy. i think you NEED to use an actual IRL Indy Car, but like i said, the body/chassis design is changing in 2012, so maybe an antique car could be best. (http://blogs.indianapolismotorspeedway.com/theexperience/files/2009/06/1911-marmon-wasp-on-track.JPG)the ball on the front of the car just looks like you're trying too hard to fit it in. dont try to force anything or tr to be too literal. i would do without the basketball all togetherWe lost that like, 3 years ago I think.Anyways, like the front on/original car more than the other.wow, i didnt even realize. thats what Orlando will do to ya i guess, LOLbohob, the logo with the current Indy car looks so much better in my opinion. its instantly recognizable as an IRL car, and you did a great job of illustrating it. the perspective works great with the word mark as well. i wouldnt change anythhing about that one. the car even has the Indianapolis wings on it (they have a specific set for the Indy 500) so it ties in perfectly GRAPHIC ARTIST BEHANCE / MEDIUM / DRIBBBLE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
supermati Posted February 15, 2010 Share Posted February 15, 2010 Wow, the new car looks amazing great job; try to flip it to see if it works better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elsephen Posted February 15, 2010 Share Posted February 15, 2010 It's hard to say for me. I like the logo as it is now. But for an NBA team, I just can't see it. I understand the reasoning for the car, but look at it from outside that state, and I think it seems random. There's got to be a way to have that element included but with basketball as the main statement rather than the car. Again, it looks great. Just doesn't look like a basketball logo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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