The MLB according to raysox

[CJworks]

You've got the right idea here, but I agree. The two scripts hardly match up, and the way the 'M' curves over the dot in the 'i' is a bit much. The primary is very empty as is, it needs some other element in there to make it complete (the other wordmark, perhaps?) The cap logo, however, is brilliant. The drop shadows are a nice touch as well.

[JWoods077]

I'd love to see you take another swing at the Rays. The wordmark I think should be a little less rigid as Rays tend to be very undulating in their movements.

I'd love to see this color scheme - http://kuler.adobe.com/#themeID/946502 - so long as the Miami Marlins aren't too close to it.

[Ted Cunningham]

Is there a reason why the away uniform doesn't have the grey shadow on its numbers?

[CJworks]

Is there a reason why the away uniform doesn't have the grey shadow on its numbers?

Probably cause it wouldn't show up. But I agree, it needs something.

[raysox]

^^^^^^

I updated it with a white drip shadow, just so it would show up. Is that good?

[raysox]

Like I said, this was coming.

4b/30 Tampa Bay Rays

I needed a better script, and a better hat. So I see what they have in their past. The previous logos were onto something, but it was lacking something. The current one is really nice, but it could be added to. I decided to tilt them, and to be honest, it adds a lot. I kept the current scripts, taking out the sun ray. Using the same colour scheme with this one too, but replacing black with dark green. There really was no where I could put a ray in that primary without looking forced. I'm up for suggestions, but nothing wowed me. here is the new work!

The last jersey, they just seemed boring, and needed more green. The Rays used vests before so its no big deal on this one. I based the script colour choice on the number/outline combo. Other than that, these are similar to my concept on page 2.

Attempt 1

[1990hornet]

the green and the columbia blue clash for me on the Rays

[CJworks]

Yea, I actually prefer the first set. I think if you outlined the scripts and numbers like you did on the first, you'd have something; I'd also drop that dark blackish color.

[raysox]

12/32 Cleveland Indians

I went to a Rays-Indians game recently, and the whole time I was noticing how lame the Tribe's set was. Chief Wahoo has random strokes on the feather, and teeth. The outlines are inconsistent, too. I have a Wahoo vector, but it was beyond repair, that means I had to trace it all by myself I fixed everything I mentioned, and added some white to the feather as an update. I dropped the block script/cap logo. I used the cursive fonts, with the C from Cleveland in a new hat logo. Simply a C with the feather. Lastly on the logos, I made the red more red, than a pinkish colour. The jerseys aren't much different. One thing I noticed was the NOB were weird in the sense that there was too many layers. Though, it looked better this way. For some reason, I thought they had a navy alt with the primary logo on the chest, turns out they didn't. So I just made one!

I really, REALLY wanted to put Sabathia, Lee, and James on the jerseys. C&C

[Bmac]

The Indians set looks sharp. The cleaned up Wahoo logo looks good. For some reason, that navy jersey is just beautiful.

[CJworks]

Dang, I'm really liking this. The chief looks better, and the C-feather was an excellent idea. Uniforms look solid, nice work.

But, with all this use of red, you got me dying for a red alternate.

[TrueYankee26]

Nice concepts

Is it me or does Chief Wahoo looks like his mouth is in Jail?

[kbaker19]

I would put a line through the teeth so it looks like he has top teeth and bottom teeth. Other than that, I really like this, especially that C logo.

[mbannon92]

I like the Indians unis, but I think you should use the C and feather logo on the home and away, preferably on the hat. It's a sweet logo but it's only on the alt.

[raysox]

I tried doing a horizontal teeth line, but it really didn't look good in my mind. I also wanted to keep Chief Wahoo in the set as much as I could.

13/30 Los Angeles Angels

No Los Angeles Angels of Anaheim of the California Republic. Simplify it down, and make it just Los Angeles. 2 things any LA team needs is an LA logo, and Los Angeles script. So I did do that. The A logo is the same, with a simple addition to the primary. I came up with the alt logo before the primary, and it seemed so simple after I figured out it looked good. FACT the Angel's vests are superior to the regular. I used them here. Nothing really else to say, just vests.

I have the O's done, i'll show you later.

[north dakota]

I like the Los Angeles script.

[kbaker19]

The Angels script isn't lined up correctly. The S is higher than the A and, unless it's how it currently is, I think it needs to be changed. I love that LA logo.

[raysox]

The Angels script isn't lined up correctly. The S is higher than the A and, unless it's how it currently is, I think it needs to be changed. I love that LA logo.

Yeah, that's how it is.

[kbaker19]

The Angels script isn't lined up correctly. The S is higher than the A and, unless it's how it currently is, I think it needs to be changed. I love that LA logo.

Yeah, that's how it is.

Ah, well you learn something new everyday.

[Still MIGHTY]

Personally, I HATE the Angels vests. I just don't like them. They just don't look like my team when they wear them. They weaken the Angels look, IMO. I hate most baseball vests in general, actually.

And if hell freezes over and Angels fans actually allow Los Angeles to show up on the jerseys, that's the way I'd want it to look. The Los Angeles script is good.

I'm not so hot on the "LA" logo though. I've seen it tried so many times, but it just looks very awkward to me. I think it's mostly because of the serifs in the middle of the letters and the halo on the A you can't get the L close enough to the A so the bottom leg of the L looks too long. Besides my whole thing of trying to avoid the Angels going full LA, I've just never liked any iteration of the modernized "LA" logo. It just doesn't work in my opinion.

Not a fan of the homeplate thing. The A is solid and identifiable by itself. And if anything it brings back a link to the Disney-fied pajama Angels logo. The first red Angels logo had the Blue baseball field-shaped field behind it, and that wasn't great for it. The A looks great by itself. And espeicially if you're going to stick with the vests, the patch needs to go. Because with the Angels, it's basically just a t-shirt under the vest. It just doenst look good.

Personally, I think any update or concept update of the Angels needs the gold halo. The gold halo is far superior to the silver one.

And I'm iffy on using a white NOB with the red numbers on the alt. Either make them both Red with blue/white outline or both white with blue outline. Not both.

Sorry if that's a lot more criticism than comments