raysox Posted June 4, 2013 Share Posted June 4, 2013 Hey fellas. I need to get back into a concept groove. While waiting to finish the first phase of a great new project with some guys on here, I decided to do some Minor League Baseball concepts! I want to fix the logos that look extremely outdated in the world of classy minor league logos. I'll probably do a few if I have an idea. I'm open to suggestions, but I won't do them all.Jupiter HammerheadsStarting with a home league team for me, the Jupiter Hammerheads' logo is pretty awful now. I used to like it, back in the days when them and the Brevard County Manatees were the only non-pro team names out there. but the Florida State League has evolved to almost making the league like every other. The current logo had uneven outlines, crudly drawn shapes, and 5 different aspects all cluttered into one. I took some cues from the Clearwater Threshers logo, and drew them a new hammerhead logo. I did a top view, hiding the teeth, but trying to give it a mean look. I brought back the J-hook logo because it's ingenious. The script is also cursive like the current road script. Some peple might not approve, but the Marlins are unconventional, and I thought it would be better than matching scripts in this case. The jerseys are pretty standard, meant to match the Marlins design wise, I did some things different. The road stands out by remaining mostly greyscale. I went with a black alternate to match Miami. So that's about it! @MichaelDanger19 | Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nash61 Posted June 4, 2013 Share Posted June 4, 2013 On September 20, 2012 at 0:50 AM, 'CS85 said: It's like watching the hellish undead creakily shuffling their way out of the flames of a liposuction clinic dumpster fire. On February 19, 2012 at 9:30 AM, 'pianoknight said: Story B: Red Wings go undefeated and score 100 goals in every game. They also beat a team comprised of Godzilla, the ghost of Abraham Lincoln, 2 Power Rangers and Betty White. Oh, and they played in the middle of Iraq on a military base. In the sand. With no ice. Santa gave them special sand-skates that allowed them to play in shorts and t-shirts in 115 degree weather. Jesus, Zeus and Buddha watched from the sidelines and ate cotton candy. POTD 5/24/12, POTD 2/26/17 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LAWeaver Posted June 4, 2013 Share Posted June 4, 2013 Great job. I'd love to see what you can do with my Tennessee Smokies! @loganaweaver - Twitter / @loganaweaver - Instagram / Nike Vapor Untouchable Football Template / Logan's Logos Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Conrad. Posted June 4, 2013 Share Posted June 4, 2013 Great job. I'd love to see what you can do with my Tennessee Smokies!co-signed. Go Smokies! Red Goat Creations :: Graphic Design Solutions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GriffinM6 Posted June 4, 2013 Share Posted June 4, 2013 I love the Hammerheads look, however, I don't like the white script on the road jersey. I think you could invert the script and outline color and it would look better.I'd love to see you separate the Gwinnett Braves' identity from the ATL Braves' one. Maybe even change the name. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
camly Posted June 4, 2013 Share Posted June 4, 2013 Ogden Raptors logo could use some work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JoHyphenE Posted June 4, 2013 Share Posted June 4, 2013 Ogden Raptors logo could use some workSome might be an understatement, but I agree. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raysox Posted June 4, 2013 Author Share Posted June 4, 2013 Ogden Raptors logo could use some workSome might be an understatement, but I agree.Someone is either a good guesser, or have seen my twitter. They're probably going to be next. I just need to figure colors @MichaelDanger19 | Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GoGamecocks29 Posted June 4, 2013 Share Posted June 4, 2013 Could you do the Savannah Sand Gnats? PHI ALPHA! SIGMA ALPHA EPSILON. CAROLINA GAMECOCKS. ST. LOUIS CARDINALS. ST. LOUIS BLUES. ORLANDO CITY SC. JACKSONVILLE JAGUARS. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
illwauk Posted June 4, 2013 Share Posted June 4, 2013 Wisconsin Timber Rattlers Fox Cities Foxes? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epiphanic Posted June 4, 2013 Share Posted June 4, 2013 It's probably not needed because the fishhook does that, but I'd prefer if the Hammerhead was curved the other way to look like a J as well. I'd also like a splash of the blue on the road uniforms. It looks a little drab with the lack of color compared to the rest of the set. "In the arena of logic, I fight unarmed."I tweet & tumble. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DustDevil61 Posted June 4, 2013 Share Posted June 4, 2013 I'd love to see you try some Pioneer League teams, like the Ogden Raptors, Orem Owlz, and Grand Junction Rockies. All need some refreshing, to say the least. AKA @LanRovr0 on Twitter LED Sig Credits to packerfan21396 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mattb6 Posted June 4, 2013 Share Posted June 4, 2013 ft wayne tin caps need it... and a new name Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted June 4, 2013 Share Posted June 4, 2013 Seems like you are getting a lot of requests instead of C&C Mike! lol The logo itself looks rather nice, it is more vertical than I like, but given the prior logo its a huge improvement. The colors are very nice, and work well together. I agree with Griffin, the white script isn't my favorite, if you flipped it to be black then white I'd like it more (or maybe black then teal?). That J hook logo is wonderful. Overal excellent work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BigBubba Posted June 4, 2013 Share Posted June 4, 2013 Great update, though it needs a few fixes. The back numbers are too close to each other...with the outline, the 2 and the 7 even touch each other. As well, an arched NoB would be better; baseball jerseys don't really work well with straight ones. Also, there's something about the logo that seems "off" to me. I love the shark and I like the script, but the way they're put together seems a bit weird. Maybe it's because the logo is from a front view while the shark is seen from the top, I'm not sure. Nobody cares about your humungous-big signature. PotD: 29/1/12 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TalktoChuck Posted June 4, 2013 Share Posted June 4, 2013 That shark logo is beautiful! But I agree with BigBubba, the integration of the shark and script could be better in the primary.And I really like the Hammerheads script, but the black outline is a little choppy. Some of the points stick out more than others, smooth that up and it'll look more polished. Also, the orange drop shadow seems off to me, especially the top of the S and H.The lack of teal on the away uniform seems like an odd choice to me. You seem to emphasize teal on everything else, yet it is non existent on the away. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raysox Posted June 25, 2013 Author Share Posted June 25, 2013 I actually made the outlines all even on the primary, but forgot to replace the actualy script. Anyway, it took me 3 weeks to change the road unifrom!Odgen would be next if I do these, I've been obsessed with soccer crests recently. @MichaelDanger19 | Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JTernup Posted June 25, 2013 Share Posted June 25, 2013 Just out of curiosity why did you put the sleeve patch on the right arm? Looks a bit awkward IMO. Everything else looks awesome though, love the update on the road jersey! Denver Nuggets Kansas City Chiefs Tampa Bay Rays Colorado Buffaloes Purdue Boilermakers Florida Gators Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadesdash91 Posted June 25, 2013 Share Posted June 25, 2013 i like it a lot better than what they are now at least this looks like a hammerhead Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrandMooreArt Posted June 25, 2013 Share Posted June 25, 2013 i think the uniforms look really good, but the logos need some work. those are pretty strong concepts that need some finessing. the biggest thing is the Hammerheads and Jupiter marks look like they belong to 2 different teams. if you just made them both in the same colors, it would help a lot.the primary logo dosent feel like the word mark and shark icon were designed with each other in mind, just one pasted on top of the other. to give it a stronger presence and better composition i recommend making the shark a bit larger and having the text go over the middle of its body. the text should also be re-worked a bit. the H and S look too separated from the rest of the letters because they're not treated in the same way. giving the whole thing the same arch and aligning the middle of the letters to the top of the end letters would fix that. also, choosing a font with a bit more height would work better. it will just allow the letters to be larger. then, make sure your black and orange strokes (maybe drop orange??) are consistant to pull the whole thing together. the gist of what i mean is below (excuse the poorly drawn tail. im finger painting on my track pad here)i think the hook-Jupiter script can be worked into this primary as well. i think what would make this concept even stronger is if the script was made to look like a fishing line attached to the hook. just "tie" it to the hook of the eye and maybe even give it a tail sweep (more track pad finger painting) GRAPHIC ARTIST BEHANCE / MEDIUM / DRIBBBLE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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