TalktoChuck Posted February 15, 2009 Share Posted February 15, 2009 Darn it. I wanna die.What?Please put white in the homes.Just beacues Elliott is a little creative and doesn't follow the "main stream" of home uniform designs, you want to die? I don't get it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elliott Posted February 15, 2009 Author Share Posted February 15, 2009 UpdateReduced all of the strokes, used a white jersey.Thunder Progress: I have picked out my color scheme, currently I am working on the wordmarks, they are looking decent, the logo package is still coming along slowly though....I will work on it more later today. Dribbble ... Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
patsox Posted February 15, 2009 Share Posted February 15, 2009 I could be mistaken, but the numbers on the Wizards' jerseys look too small and the names look too big. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
logocruncher Posted February 15, 2009 Share Posted February 15, 2009 I like the Wizards concept a lot. Really clean, and the road jersey is close to perfect. I like the elimination of black. But at home, do you want to try reversing gold and blue on the numbers and sleeve trim? That might make them stand out more, because as is the gold outlined in blue doesn't look so hot. Nice work though. What are the Thunder's colors now? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TalktoChuck Posted February 15, 2009 Share Posted February 15, 2009 I was a fan of the gold home. It was much better. This is a very solid series Elliott. I'm excited to see the new OKC Thunder you are working on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jake22 Posted February 15, 2009 Share Posted February 15, 2009 i like the gold jersey much more than the white one, and also i dont like how the blue jersey has no side panneling like the white/gold ones do. THE ROCKIES STIRRUP PROJECTPart 1, Part 2...Oregon Duck Tracker 2011 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bohob Posted February 15, 2009 Share Posted February 15, 2009 On the homes, I think gold sides outlined in blue and blue names/numbers outlined in gold. That way it's still balanced, but the names/numbers would be more visible. NHL 2016 by Bowen Hobbs * BOHOB's MLB Redesign Project * MiLB Re-Brands * NCAA Football Concepts Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BB61 Posted February 15, 2009 Share Posted February 15, 2009 Darn it. I wanna die.What?Please put white in the homes.Please stop making demands on other people's concepts. These aren't for you specifically. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
C's Posted February 16, 2009 Share Posted February 16, 2009 Concept 12: HeatOk, so if you hate this one, I understand. I just wanted to do something creative. These might be a little too crazy to actually be on the court, but I think it's actually a pretty good idea for them to use the whole flame motif. The alternate is a similar template, it just doesn't have all of the flames.C+C appreciated.Next: WarriorsI'm late to the party, but this is farking incredible. Very well done.Really liking the Sixers, Blazers, and Suns concepts as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheRealPepman Posted February 16, 2009 Share Posted February 16, 2009 UpdateReduced all of the strokes, used a white jersey.Thunder Progress: I have picked out my color scheme, currently I am working on the wordmarks, they are looking decent, the logo package is still coming along slowly though....I will work on it more later today.The best! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elliott Posted February 17, 2009 Author Share Posted February 17, 2009 Here is the first draft of the Thunder everyone. Like I hinted at, I tried to incorporate brown, and I went with sand to accent it. I tried to base some elements, specifically the hand holding the bolt, off of my last Thunder concept. But everything is revamped, and overall I think it's a much more professional logo.Really, I went through a great number of drafts before I settled on this. I first was trying to incorporate the hammer of Thor, but 1) it always looked like the Berlin Thunder and 2) it just wasn't that good. I think this has a lot of potential to improve though. Comments appreciated. Dribbble ... Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JayJaxon Posted February 17, 2009 Share Posted February 17, 2009 I like where that Thunder concept could go. It looks good so far. There's not much there in the way of color, but it's still an improvement over the current logo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TalktoChuck Posted February 17, 2009 Share Posted February 17, 2009 WAY better than their current. Great job with this Elliott. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
patsox Posted February 17, 2009 Share Posted February 17, 2009 Here is the first draft of the Thunder everyone. Like I hinted at, I tried to incorporate brown, and I went with sand to accent it. I tried to base some elements, specifically the hand holding the bolt, off of my last Thunder concept. But everything is revamped, and overall I think it's a much more professional logo.Really, I went through a great number of drafts before I settled on this. I first was trying to incorporate the hammer of Thor, but 1) it always looked like the Berlin Thunder and 2) it just wasn't that good. I think this has a lot of potential to improve though. Comments appreciated.I don't like the colors. With the lightning bolt hand it looks like too much of a cross between the Buffalo identity and a thunderstorm identity. Go with one or the other. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
joshhockey Posted February 17, 2009 Share Posted February 17, 2009 I think its a huge improvement over their current logo but the hand needs some work and I'm not sure about that colour scheme. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Throwback Posted February 17, 2009 Share Posted February 17, 2009 I like that, it definatly says "Oklahoma" to me. Nice work. ~?~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bohob Posted February 17, 2009 Share Posted February 17, 2009 The wordmark and overall concept look great. The only thing bugging me is the hand. The thumb would never be bent at that angle, and the finger could read more like fingers. Love the brown though. Maybe you could incorporate some accent color in it, if not, it's still good. NHL 2016 by Bowen Hobbs * BOHOB's MLB Redesign Project * MiLB Re-Brands * NCAA Football Concepts Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elliott Posted February 17, 2009 Author Share Posted February 17, 2009 The wordmark and overall concept look great. The only thing bugging me is the hand. The thumb would never be bent at that angle, and the finger could read more like fingers. Love the brown though. Maybe you could incorporate some accent color in it, if not, it's still good.I feel you, seriously, the thumb was the part I just could not get right. Looking at it now, I see it's wrong. I'll see what I can do to tweak it. Thanks for all comments so far guys. Dribbble ... Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bohob Posted February 18, 2009 Share Posted February 18, 2009 The wordmark and overall concept look great. The only thing bugging me is the hand. The thumb would never be bent at that angle, and the finger could read more like fingers. Love the brown though. Maybe you could incorporate some accent color in it, if not, it's still good.I feel you, seriously, the thumb was the part I just could not get right. Looking at it now, I see it's wrong. I'll see what I can do to tweak it. Thanks for all comments so far guys.I think the thumb goes over the other fingers.Try to find some close-ups of someone throwing a javelin. That should help. NHL 2016 by Bowen Hobbs * BOHOB's MLB Redesign Project * MiLB Re-Brands * NCAA Football Concepts Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CAB Posted February 18, 2009 Share Posted February 18, 2009 The wordmark and overall concept look great. The only thing bugging me is the hand. The thumb would never be bent at that angle, and the finger could read more like fingers. Love the brown though. Maybe you could incorporate some accent color in it, if not, it's still good.I feel you, seriously, the thumb was the part I just could not get right. Looking at it now, I see it's wrong. I'll see what I can do to tweak it. Thanks for all comments so far guys.I think the thumb goes over the other fingers.Try to find some close-ups of someone throwing a javelin. That should help.I agree the hand is the biggest problem with this logo, other than that, youre heading in the right direction with this. I really like the use of brown in this concept too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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