Beast Mode Posted February 21, 2009 Share Posted February 21, 2009 Absolutely perfect. It's like Frankenbird.Help Fort Atlantic grow! Help Fort Atlantic's industry! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
scottysprings Posted February 21, 2009 Share Posted February 21, 2009 Great job man, congrats on completing the whole series. I have a few things to nitpick on the Thunder jerseys, and they are very nitpicky so don't be feel obligated to change them On the white jersey I would make the cuffs black and on the black jersey I would make them either yellow or black. Next, I would change the logo on the side of the shorts to the secondary because the primary looks too busy on there. Lastly, I would move up the "Thunder" wordmark and number on the front of the jersey, they seem way to low. Also, have you tried centering the number rather than having it offset to the right? It might look cool contered. Great job again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elliott Posted February 21, 2009 Author Share Posted February 21, 2009 ^Thanks, here's an update. Dribbble ... Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BJBerthiaume Posted February 21, 2009 Share Posted February 21, 2009 You absolutely nailed this concept. Dead on, nice job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
scottysprings Posted February 21, 2009 Share Posted February 21, 2009 Update looks awesome, great job and congrats again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CAB Posted February 21, 2009 Share Posted February 21, 2009 Update looks awesome, great job and congrats again.I can't praise you enough man. This was a fantastic series and a great way to end it.P.S. Please do another redesign! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lbr218 Posted February 21, 2009 Share Posted February 21, 2009 ^Thanks, here's an update.Love everything. Especially the colors and the wordmark. Great job! "Why would anybody ever eat anything besides breakfast food?"-Leslie Knope (Amy Poehler), Parks and Recreation Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Beast Mode Posted February 21, 2009 Share Posted February 21, 2009 The Thunder was far and away your best concept. It's like Frankenbird.Help Fort Atlantic grow! Help Fort Atlantic's industry! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eRay Posted February 21, 2009 Share Posted February 21, 2009 Great job sticking with the whole series. I personally admire that. Every concept was quality, too. Loved looking at every single one of these. You have made it hard for me to want to start my NBA redesign, but at the same time every concept of yours has motivated me to get going on it. Again, great job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bohob Posted February 21, 2009 Share Posted February 21, 2009 The jerseys look good, however I think the numerals could have a little bit of space between them. They look a little squished. Also, the name should probably be a little smaller. (What would happen if Joel Przybilla was on the team?) NHL 2016 by Bowen Hobbs * BOHOB's MLB Redesign Project * MiLB Re-Brands * NCAA Football Concepts Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jake22 Posted February 21, 2009 Share Posted February 21, 2009 i am going to join the group in saying that this is the best okc concept i have ever seen on here. great work and i admire your will to do the entire nba, i would though be verey happy if you did alternates for all the teams that you did not do them for. THE ROCKIES STIRRUP PROJECTPart 1, Part 2...Oregon Duck Tracker 2011 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShinyHubCaps Posted February 22, 2009 Share Posted February 22, 2009 The Thunder update looks like the Milwaukee Panthers' uniforms.Great work nonetheless. There's nothing in the NBA like it.Also, does anyone have the official count on the number of OKC Thunder concepts to date? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheRealPepman Posted February 22, 2009 Share Posted February 22, 2009 The Thunder unis looks very decent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elliott Posted February 22, 2009 Author Share Posted February 22, 2009 Here's the alt, silver is kept to a minimum, I altered the wordmark, and you get a unorthodox striping style on the sides... Dribbble ... Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
patsox Posted February 22, 2009 Share Posted February 22, 2009 Make the black outline hug the inside of the C and make the OKC wordmark bigger and this will be excellent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TalktoChuck Posted February 22, 2009 Share Posted February 22, 2009 The alternate is beautiful, I love the lightning striping pattern. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bohob Posted February 22, 2009 Share Posted February 22, 2009 Personally, I think the OKC wordmark needs the two-tone effect. It looks plain without it, and it doesn't match the logo on the shorts. The lightning side panels rock hard, though. I also, want to re-mention what I said about the NOBs being too large and the numerals being too close together. These little details will certainly improve what is already a great concept. I think black numerals might be the way to go with the alt. I know the Lakers have white on yellow, but generally, dark numerals look better on yellow. Finally, I just noticed the logo on the shorts is going toward the back right leg of the home and away. Maybe try a logo placement more similar to the alt for those shorts sets. NHL 2016 by Bowen Hobbs * BOHOB's MLB Redesign Project * MiLB Re-Brands * NCAA Football Concepts Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elliott Posted February 22, 2009 Author Share Posted February 22, 2009 Personally, I think the OKC wordmark needs the two-tone effect. It looks plain without it, and it doesn't match the logo on the shorts. The lightning side panels rock hard, though. I also, want to re-mention what I said about the NOBs being too large and the numerals being too close together. These little details will certainly improve what is already a great concept. I think black numerals might be the way to go with the alt. I know the Lakers have white on yellow, but generally, dark numerals look better on yellow. Finally, I just noticed the logo on the shorts is going toward the back right leg of the home and away. Maybe try a logo placement more similar to the alt for those shorts sets.Ok, you are definitely right about the numbers and NOB, I just forgot to do it, so I will be changing that up. Thanks. Also I will be making a few other tweaks that you mentioned. Ok guys, I am going back and adding a few alternates, after I finished OKC I had 9 teams with alternates, so I will be adding 5 or so more. So far I have done alts for the Suns and Nuggets, they are already up on the Photobucket, added to the home and aways. I will also be posting just the alts, though, on this thread for those of us who are too lazy to click on the link in my sig . Dribbble ... Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drew22 Posted February 22, 2009 Share Posted February 22, 2009 What others? I was thinking Cavs, Pacers, Lakers, and maybe Wizards? Eagles/Heels/Dawgs/Falcons/Hawks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
logocruncher Posted February 22, 2009 Share Posted February 22, 2009 Really, really excellent work. Absolutely beautiful- I have no real complaints, just a couple of suggestions. Maybe slap on black numerals on the alt, and have a two-tone wordmark on it for consistency's sake. But I can't say how impressed I am with the quality of your work. Wow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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