ValiantRed600 Posted December 1, 2011 Share Posted December 1, 2011 No offense, but I'm not a big fan of the Jets in that color, I would try to make it a more green color, and less of an olive Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
piratesfan16 Posted December 1, 2011 Share Posted December 1, 2011 That Avalanche wordmark is kick***. Great job on this whole series. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BigBubba Posted December 2, 2011 Share Posted December 2, 2011 I see the Conservative Party logo in there... I know its a bit different, but avoiding any similarities to a Political party should be paramount.... Nobody cares about your humungous-big signature. PotD: 29/1/12 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bohob Posted December 5, 2011 Author Share Posted December 5, 2011 .:: #12-3: COLORADO AVALANCHE FINALIZED ::. OK, so here is the finalized Colorado Avalanche concept. I went with the version of the primary that didn't have a bottom of the A. Also, the outlines are now powder blue, so I switched the piping color on the home and away to powder blue. The away now has burgundy gloves and breezers. NHL 2016 by Bowen Hobbs * BOHOB's MLB Redesign Project * MiLB Re-Brands * NCAA Football Concepts Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BigBubba Posted December 5, 2011 Share Posted December 5, 2011 Now perhaps I'm a bit late here, but I think the jerseys are way too plain. You should add the mountain-range stripes at the bottom because while the logos are nice, the jerseys are a bland Edge disaster (except for the alt, of course). Nobody cares about your humungous-big signature. PotD: 29/1/12 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kryptik Posted December 5, 2011 Share Posted December 5, 2011 I might be alone, but I think the Avalanche wordmark is trying to be TOO sharp with the abstract As. I love the change to the primary, but put some lines through those As and I think you'll have a winner there. But that's just my thought. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ark Posted December 5, 2011 Share Posted December 5, 2011 Wow, those Avs uniforms are great. I agree that there should be mountain horizontal stripes at the bottom.Now to go through the other ones... Yeah, your logo designs are great! I especially love the Flyers' Liberty Bell alternate. That would have made for a great Winter Classic jersey. However, besides the Kings (not counting the retros) and Ducks, I think all of the teams have had better uniforms in their history which would work with Edge. But like I said, nice work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stampman Posted December 5, 2011 Share Posted December 5, 2011 The away now has burgundy gloves and breezers. And looking better for it... Comic Sans walks into a bar, and the bartender says, "Sorry, we don't serve your type here." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bohob Posted December 8, 2011 Author Share Posted December 8, 2011 .:: #12-4: COLORADO AVALANCHE UPDATE ::. I tweaked the logo and type. The bigger change is the new home and away uniforms. They have mountain-style trim on the sleeves and hem. The alternate is basically unchanged. C&C please. NHL 2016 by Bowen Hobbs * BOHOB's MLB Redesign Project * MiLB Re-Brands * NCAA Football Concepts Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wildwing64 Posted December 8, 2011 Share Posted December 8, 2011 Probably the best Avs concept I've seen. Love the primary logo especially. The mountain-like trim on the uniforms is a nice touch without going slightly overboard like the original Avs jerseys, and getting rid of the unnecessary black altogether was a good choice.About the only change I'd make would be to swap the blues around on the third. The icy blue you chose works great as an accent colour, but it's too bright to be the main focus on a dark coloured uniform. PotD: 24/08/2017 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bohob Posted December 9, 2011 Author Share Posted December 9, 2011 Any more thoughts before I move on to the next team? NHL 2016 by Bowen Hobbs * BOHOB's MLB Redesign Project * MiLB Re-Brands * NCAA Football Concepts Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bohob Posted February 2, 2012 Author Share Posted February 2, 2012 .:: #9-4: DALLAS STARS ACTUALLY FINALIZED ::. I re-did the type on the Stars. It now matches the numbers. NHL 2016 by Bowen Hobbs * BOHOB's MLB Redesign Project * MiLB Re-Brands * NCAA Football Concepts Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aci Posted February 2, 2012 Share Posted February 2, 2012 Dallas StarsNew colours: Very goodNew primary logo: Very goodNew wordmarks: Very goodNew numbers: Very goodNew uniforms: Not so much. If you have such a great logo, you shouldn't hide it on the shoulders in favour of a wordmark and a very plain secondary logo. The Texas outline is a passable shoulder logo, but should never, ever take the role of a primary crest because it doesn't have the depth required for such a role. The plain striping also clashes with the new logo and number font and everything... it's all very modern, and then you have it on a very plain college hockey template. Hamilton Eagles- 2012 and 2013 Continental Hockey League Champions! 2011, 2012, 2013, 2014 & 2015 CHL East Division Champions! Niagara Dragoons- 2012 United League and CCSLC World Series Champions! 2012, 2013, 2014 and 2015 UL Robinson Division Champions! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bohob Posted February 2, 2012 Author Share Posted February 2, 2012 Dallas StarsNew colours: Very goodNew primary logo: Very goodNew wordmarks: Very goodNew numbers: Very goodNew uniforms: Not so much. If you have such a great logo, you shouldn't hide it on the shoulders in favour of a wordmark and a very plain secondary logo. The Texas outline is a passable shoulder logo, but should never, ever take the role of a primary crest because it doesn't have the depth required for such a role. The plain striping also clashes with the new logo and number font and everything... it's all very modern, and then you have it on a very plain college hockey template.aci, the primary home and away uniforms are a few pages back. That brown jersey is the third, which I wanted to be significantly different from the primary home and away. Sorry if I confused you. Here they are for reference? NHL 2016 by Bowen Hobbs * BOHOB's MLB Redesign Project * MiLB Re-Brands * NCAA Football Concepts Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cody21 Posted February 2, 2012 Share Posted February 2, 2012 nice job here with the stars. In the last game against Detroit, the time from ten minutes left to one minute left was probably the longest nine minutes of my life. But from one to zero was probably the greatest time I've ever had. I didn't want the clock to run out. It was such a great feeling: people crying in the stands, people jumping up and down, people cheering. Guys couldn't even sit up on the bench. It was probably the best minute of my life.Ah, the "I'm kidding" - the universal internet excuse for saying something that others perceived as dumb. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jelly of the Month Posted February 3, 2012 Share Posted February 3, 2012 Being from Houston I severely dislike anything that involves the name Dallas, but I must admit I do like your Stars redesign. Very cool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tigerslionspistonshabs Posted February 3, 2012 Share Posted February 3, 2012 This looks alot like a Texas Longhorns hockey team. Not sure if they have one or not, but... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Morgan33 Posted February 3, 2012 Share Posted February 3, 2012 Needs Green. If you replaced that rust colour with a dark shade of forest green this would be one of the best Stars concepts I've ever seen. Don't get me wrong, it's good as it stands but I would never think it was a Dallas Stars jersey had you not said so in the description Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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