FiddySicks Posted March 18, 2007 Share Posted March 18, 2007 Very nice by both of you. Wanna make full concepts? I'm sure they'd be awesome.You see, thats the thing. When you hit the nail dead on the head like this theres really no need to make a full concept. A wordmark MAYBE, but even that may be taking it too far. Its like an awesome movie. Its way to easy to fu*k it up with a crappy sequel. Not saying a full package from these guys would be crappy, but i think you get waht im saying. On 11/19/2012 at 7:23 PM, oldschoolvikings said: She’s still half convinced “Chris Creamer” is a porn site.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jezus_Ghoti Posted March 18, 2007 Share Posted March 18, 2007 If this board had awards, this would be in the running for logo concept of the year. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
McCall Posted March 18, 2007 Author Share Posted March 18, 2007 Sheebus! I was not expecting this kind of response. I did it at 2 o'clock in the morning when I couldn't sleep. I don't even do that much pencil work with logos anymore. It's just that since I lost Illustrator about a year and half ago, I haven't really had anything else to work with, so I just kinda stopped. But with this I just figured what the hey. So yeah I scanned in on my boss's scanner here at the ballpark (Hammons Field, where I work), did a quick "paint by numbers" kinda thing to get a visual of the color layout of how it would looked, and posted it just hoping to get a few critiques, let it die, and then someday when I got Illustrator again, hopefully clean it up, and maybe get a few more critiques. But thanks to StPatty's clean up, it went into full on "Kick @$$" mode and look at it now. I really do wanna do a full package with this, but I may take my time, to make sure it goes right and I don't do an overkill with it.But thanks for all the comments. I've only did a handful of concepts (you can tryand search for them and see) before I lost Illustrator. Never thought my best one would come out of a pencil and notebook paper at 2am. https://dribbble.com/MakaioCall Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roger Clemente Posted March 18, 2007 Share Posted March 18, 2007 This logo is amazing. I love it and think the Diamondbacks should use it. Great job.--Roger "Time?" Clemente. Follow me on Twitter if you care: @Animal_Clans.My opinion may or may not be the same as yours. The choice is up to you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
McCall Posted March 18, 2007 Author Share Posted March 18, 2007 I may try and work on a wordmark to go with it. May be a bit before I have one ready, though. https://dribbble.com/MakaioCall Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LEWJ Posted March 19, 2007 Share Posted March 19, 2007 I really like this. it loooks great. I'd love to see a wordmark. | BROWNS | BUCKEYES | CAVALIERS | INDIANS | Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AJM Posted March 19, 2007 Share Posted March 19, 2007 looks top notch. really like this logo. (MLF) Chicago Cannons, (IHA) Phoenix Firebirds - 2021 Xtreme Cup Champions (WAFL) Phoenix Federals - WAFL World Bowl XII Champions (Defunct) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Keebe Posted March 19, 2007 Share Posted March 19, 2007 Now I'm confused.I thought the team was named after a snake, not an alligator. Because that is what the my trained eye first saw. Flesh it out a little more and make it look like a snake and you are on you way to an OK concept.(It looks like an alligator finishing off a fish for dinner) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rams80 Posted March 19, 2007 Share Posted March 19, 2007 Now I'm confused.I thought the team was named after a snake, not an alligator. Because that is what the my trained eye first saw. Flesh it out a little more and make it look like a snake and you are on you way to an OK concept.(It looks like an alligator finishing off a fish for dinner)Your "trained eyes" also thought this was Bobcat.Frankly Tom, I'd get glasses. On 8/1/2010 at 4:01 PM, winters in buffalo said: You manage to balance agitation with just enough salient points to keep things interesting. Kind of a low-rent DG_Now. On 1/2/2011 at 9:07 PM, Sodboy13 said: Today, we are all otaku. "The city of Peoria was once the site of the largest distillery in the world and later became the site for mass production of penicillin. So it is safe to assume that present-day Peorians are descended from syphilitic boozehounds."-Stephen Colbert POTD: February 15, 2010, June 20, 2010 The Glorious Bloom State Penguins (NCFAF) 2014: 2-9, 2015: 7-5 (L Pineapple Bowl), 2016: 1-0 (NCFAB) 2014-15: 10-8, 2015-16: 14-5 (SMC Champs, L 1st Round February Frenzy) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BB61 Posted March 19, 2007 Share Posted March 19, 2007 Now I'm confused.I thought the team was named after a snake, not an alligator. Because that is what the my trained eye first saw. Flesh it out a little more and make it look like a snake and you are on you way to an OK concept.(It looks like an alligator finishing off a fish for dinner)Your "trained eyes" also thought this was Bobcat.Frankly Tom, I'd get glasses.Let's not forget this dandy.A musical note? Looks more like a pigskin passing gas. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
steiny_ramone Posted March 20, 2007 Share Posted March 20, 2007 Now I'm confused.I thought the team was named after a snake, not an alligator. Because that is what the my trained eye first saw. Flesh it out a little more and make it look like a snake and you are on you way to an OK concept.(It looks like an alligator finishing off a fish for dinner)Your "trained eyes" also thought this was Bobcat.Frankly Tom, I'd get glasses.That's the guy? Great logo by the way. I'd buy a hat with that logo on it. facespace?http://www.myspace.com/seancalcottmusic http://www.myspace.com/forgottentoys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rtrich11 Posted March 20, 2007 Share Posted March 20, 2007 I thought the team was named after a snake, not an alligator. Because that is what the my trained eye first saw. Flesh it out a little more and make it look like a snake and you are on you way to an OK concept. I wouldn't say alligator, but I think the mouth is a little too "pointy" for lack of a better term. Perhaps a more rounded bottom jaw could get it back to snake shape. I was thinking about other styles of A's to use-more angular, etc., but too much could be distracting. I like the concept- looks really good. cafepress.com/artbyrichards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J23P Posted March 20, 2007 Share Posted March 20, 2007 fanFREAKINGtastic! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FiddySicks Posted March 20, 2007 Share Posted March 20, 2007 Now I'm confused.I thought the team was named after a snake, not an alligator. Because that is what the my trained eye first saw. Flesh it out a little more and make it look like a snake and you are on you way to an OK concept.(It looks like an alligator finishing off a fish for dinner)Your "trained eyes" also thought this was Bobcat.Frankly Tom, I'd get glasses.Uggh. Tom's back AGAIN? On 11/19/2012 at 7:23 PM, oldschoolvikings said: She’s still half convinced “Chris Creamer” is a porn site.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BallWonk Posted March 20, 2007 Share Posted March 20, 2007 Wow -- this is one of the best concepts I've seen here. I generally like the individual design elements of the new D-Backs uniforms (though the execution of those elements on the actual unis is in many cases poor). But this puts the real new D-Backs look to shame. And no, the snake doesn't look anything like an alligator. I've watched enough Crocodile Hunter in my day to be pretty sure that gators and crocs don't have long, thin, tubular necks that can stand up vertically while their heads remain fully horizontal -- you know, like snakes do -- nor diamond patterns on their backs. And that's an awfully short snout for a gator or a croc. I don't know from snakes enough to say whether this is really as awesome a snake as it looks like to me, but an alligator it ain't.My only quibble on this would be the red snake elements. In the abstract, I like the contrasting eyes and tongue. But I don't like how the red tongue looks on a red background. I think the tongue needs to be black, because this logo absolutely needs to look great on red. There's something about the placement and shape of the tongue that, when it's red, looks to me more like the snake has just blown a bit of the A away, like the Big Bad Wolf huffing and puffing, than it looks like his tongue. The eye will probably look great either way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
B.A. Posted March 20, 2007 Share Posted March 20, 2007 That really is an amazing logo concept. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CC97 Posted March 20, 2007 Share Posted March 20, 2007 Wow great work! Would make an excellent BP Cap logo or shoulder logo --- Chris Creamer Founder/Editor, SportsLogos.Net "The Mothership" • News • Facebook • X/Twitter • Instagram Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IceCap Posted March 20, 2007 Share Posted March 20, 2007 Top notch. This is much better then an alternate or a bp logo. The current "A" (a recoloured hold-over from the last D'Backs set) doesn't fit in with the scheme. This does. This should be the D'Backs' official "A", no questions asked. Great job guys. PotD 26/2/12 1/7/15 2020 BASS Spin the Wheel, Make the Deal Regular Season Champion 2021 BASS NFL Pick'em Regular Season Champion Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
leggman01 Posted March 20, 2007 Share Posted March 20, 2007 i agree that it doesn't look ANYTHING like an alligator, but there is a little point at the base of the mouth which is the only flaw i can find on this logo...the ONLY flaw i can find Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BBTV Posted March 20, 2007 Share Posted March 20, 2007 I actually see where Tom (if that is indeed him) is coming from with is remark about the alligator finishing off the fish, (though I'd contend that it would be a crocodile, not a gator, but that doesn't matter.)I do think that it looks like a snake and not a gator / croc, but the "tongue" certainly looks like the tail-end of a fish being sucked down, not something shooting out.I'm honestly not sure what advice to give to fix this, but whenever I look at this otherwise great logo, I just see a fish getting swallowed.Sorry. "The views expressed here are mine and do not reflect the official opinion of my employer or the organization through which the Internet was accessed." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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