jaha32 Posted October 6, 2011 Author Share Posted October 6, 2011 Good eye on that green smudge on the court, Geo. I'll take it out on the next update. As far as the 3pt arc being confusing, I want to keep it somewhat similar (I would think any basketball player, or at least 3 point shooter, has a good idea where they are on the court). I might try having the arc line itself lime green and then keep that inner part dark green. DesignsByHahn.com Behance Dribbble Instragram Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaha32 Posted October 7, 2011 Author Share Posted October 7, 2011 Update: Added a logo to the shorts. Most seemed to like the numbers above the word on the jerseys, so I left it like that. Also, made the 3pt arc and out-of-bounds line lime green, to hopefully make it less confusing. DesignsByHahn.com Behance Dribbble Instragram Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mbannon92 Posted October 7, 2011 Share Posted October 7, 2011 The lime green lines help a lot. And the shorts look a lot better now. Nike + CFL 2015 | 2015-16 NBA Concepts | Complete College Football Redesign Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MC2 Posted October 7, 2011 Share Posted October 7, 2011 I know it really doesn't matter because this is a fictional league, but which jerseys are the regular away? Light or dark green? Fast. Hard. Finish. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaha32 Posted October 7, 2011 Author Share Posted October 7, 2011 I know it really doesn't matter because this is a fictional league, but which jerseys are the regular away? Light or dark green?I understand why youre asking that though, because obviously dark green is the primary color, but the dark green jerseys look more like alternate since it's color arrangement is a little different than the other two. Plus the lime green says the city name, and I've been putting the city name on many of the aways in this series.So I'd say lime is the regular away, but I like the dark green better so hypothetically, maybe overtime the dark greens alternatives would be worn more often. DesignsByHahn.com Behance Dribbble Instragram Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
penguino Posted December 2, 2011 Share Posted December 2, 2011 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GriffinM6 Posted December 3, 2011 Share Posted December 3, 2011 Tampa is my favorite out of all of your teams. Great job, the lime jersey is amazing. The one thing that could make this better, is putting a plam tree under or in the script. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AAO Posted December 3, 2011 Share Posted December 3, 2011 Nicely done. Behance Network || ianbakar.com || Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaha32 Posted December 10, 2011 Author Share Posted December 10, 2011 Tampa is my favorite out of all of your teams. Great job, the lime jersey is amazing. The one thing that could make this better, is putting a plam tree under or in the script.Thanks. I considered placing a tree on the jerseys, but it ended up being too much. Maybe I will reconsider that idea on one jersey.Anyway, on to the next team. It's been a few months since I posted, but I finally had time to work on the next team, the San Diego Admirals, named after the Naval base in SD. I'm running out of cities in the west so decided to name a team "San Diego". The California Condors were originally in San Diego, but with the Admirals now being placed there, the Condors can be relocated to Fresno or some other place. For right now this just the primary logo. I haven't had time to work on anything else yet. I'm not sure which color combo to go with. Because of the nautical theme, they have to be blue.And also, while I'm at it, I made some changed to the Royals -- thickened lines, different lighting on the ball, and swapping some colors on the letters. They're minimal, but I think it's better. DesignsByHahn.com Behance Dribbble Instragram Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeFrank Posted December 10, 2011 Share Posted December 10, 2011 Maybe replace the orange/gold with a bright Charger yellow? concepts: washington football (2017) ... nfl (2013) ... yikes potd 10/20/12 origin story Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaha32 Posted December 10, 2011 Author Share Posted December 10, 2011 Maybe replace the orange/gold with a bright Charger yellow?I was meaning to use a yellow, not orange, so if I go with those colors, I would change it. One similar to the Chargers and the other the Padres. Also, now that I look at this logo again, I think I need to work on making the thickness of the blue outline more consistent. There are some incosistencies in this. DesignsByHahn.com Behance Dribbble Instragram Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mbannon92 Posted December 10, 2011 Share Posted December 10, 2011 I prefer the gold over the yellow. The yellow is too bold and takes away from the blue, while the softer gold accents the blue well and doesn't immediately attract your eyes.And the logo is really well done, of course! Nike + CFL 2015 | 2015-16 NBA Concepts | Complete College Football Redesign Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AAO Posted December 11, 2011 Share Posted December 11, 2011 Padres' colors on the Admirals looks solid. Behance Network || ianbakar.com || Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crashcarson15 Posted December 11, 2011 Share Posted December 11, 2011 Damn, definitely the one on the right. Really nice start, though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nash61 Posted December 11, 2011 Share Posted December 11, 2011 I prefer the one on the left. The yellow makes me think "sunshine". On September 20, 2012 at 0:50 AM, 'CS85 said: It's like watching the hellish undead creakily shuffling their way out of the flames of a liposuction clinic dumpster fire. On February 19, 2012 at 9:30 AM, 'pianoknight said: Story B: Red Wings go undefeated and score 100 goals in every game. They also beat a team comprised of Godzilla, the ghost of Abraham Lincoln, 2 Power Rangers and Betty White. Oh, and they played in the middle of Iraq on a military base. In the sand. With no ice. Santa gave them special sand-skates that allowed them to play in shorts and t-shirts in 115 degree weather. Jesus, Zeus and Buddha watched from the sidelines and ate cotton candy. POTD 5/24/12, POTD 2/26/17  Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fox Posted December 12, 2011 Share Posted December 12, 2011 This series is absoultely amazing. Tampa Tropics = awesome concept! Keep up the good work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kryptik Posted December 12, 2011 Share Posted December 12, 2011 I love the bolder look of the one on the left, but I'm kind of torn. Both look really good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dgnmrwrw Posted December 12, 2011 Share Posted December 12, 2011 Both look great, though I'm leaning slightly toward the one on the right, with the Padres-ish sand color. (And I don't think splitting up "San Diego" works very well. It's probably better to keep the "Diego" up top, to the right of the anchor.)Thrilled to see this back. HURRICANES | PANTHERS | WHITE SOX | WOLFPACK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaha32 Posted December 13, 2011 Author Share Posted December 13, 2011 Both look great, though I'm leaning slightly toward the one on the right, with the Padres-ish sand color. (And I don't think splitting up "San Diego" works very well. It's probably better to keep the "Diego" up top, to the right of the anchor.)Thrilled to see this back.Yeah I had a difficult time figuring out where to place the "San Diego". I tried to have it all fit on the top, then only the top left, then eliminating it all together which left the logo feeling somewhat incomplete, and then settled on what it is now, which gives the left and right sides of the logo a flipped symmetry, which I kind of like. "Diego" just doesnt fit well on the top. I hope to get a chance to work on a secondary logo soon and jerseys, but have been kind of busy lately. This series is not dead, just slowed down. I hope to get to 30 teams...eventually. DesignsByHahn.com Behance Dribbble Instragram Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaha32 Posted December 25, 2011 Author Share Posted December 25, 2011 First of all, Merry Christmas! I finally got around to making jerseys and a couple secondary logos for the Admirals. The primary is changed a little too. I went with the goldish color since more seemed to like it over the yellow. The jerseys were influence somewhat by Marquette's and the throwback Cavs. The player on the jersey is Bill Walton. DesignsByHahn.com Behance Dribbble Instragram Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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