raysox Posted April 28, 2012 Author Share Posted April 28, 2012 Thanks! I'm going to try to finish the US tonight. Right now I'm updating Denver(already posted w/ unis), Carolina is being worked on, and I have Minnesota. Then I need to do DC @MichaelDanger19 | Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raymie Posted April 28, 2012 Share Posted April 28, 2012 Not feeling the font you're using for Phoenix City. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raysox Posted April 29, 2012 Author Share Posted April 29, 2012 Carolina and Minnesota have been updated. @MichaelDanger19 | Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DolphinManatee Posted April 29, 2012 Share Posted April 29, 2012 This concept series is AWESOME!!! I was thinking about making a concept series based on a sport I made up (stay tuned).P.S.: I recommend when you post something (a post or a topic) that you do not click "Add Reply" (or anything similar) more than once. It causes multiple posts.P.P.S.: This thread is probably dead now because I just posted now. (What is it that everybody hates about me?) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drdougfresh Posted April 29, 2012 Share Posted April 29, 2012 P.P.S.: This thread is probably dead now because I just posted now. (What is it that everybody hates about me?) What the hell are you talking about?Nice work on this series, raysox. I really like the kits you designed for PHX! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mbannon92 Posted April 29, 2012 Share Posted April 29, 2012 Really liking Phoenix, Raysox. Both logos are really good. I like the diamond and ribbon a lot, and the sublimated flag is a good touch. The unis look nice as well. Nike + CFL 2015 | 2015-16 NBA Concepts | Complete College Football Redesign Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raysox Posted April 30, 2012 Author Share Posted April 30, 2012 You guys. America is DONE.Washington FederalsThe thread I started sold me on the nickname. "The Feds" would be a great nickname. If you remember the juggernaut logo I considered, you can see I changed a lot. I dropped gold, and made the pentagon white, and put the flag in the middle and stuck with the motif throughout. The alt is a simple DC. I went for simplicity with this one for sure dropping the gold and trying to use a lot of white.I looked for what works here. A design boxing in the flag motif on the chest. I went for red/navy on the clash because the Caps look REALLY good like that. I actually love this set as a whole.So the US league is done. I will be wrapping it up with some odds and ends. You'll see! @MichaelDanger19 | Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crashcarson15 Posted April 30, 2012 Share Posted April 30, 2012 Holy :censored:ing sex, the Minnesota jerseys are fantastically orgasm inducing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drdougfresh Posted April 30, 2012 Share Posted April 30, 2012 Nice work on this one, I like the name more as well. My only issue is the way the third star shows up in the DC emblem, only a tiny corner piece of the star is showing. Maybe an oversight, but that's my only complaint. Nice work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raysox Posted April 30, 2012 Author Share Posted April 30, 2012 Yeah, I was on the fence about that. Centered, thats what had to be done. I figured since part of it showed it was fine. @MichaelDanger19 | Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Burmy Posted April 30, 2012 Share Posted April 30, 2012 BEAUTIFUL. An excellent conclusion to Part One of this series!Can't wait to see what Canada has in store... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaha32 Posted April 30, 2012 Share Posted April 30, 2012 Nice work on this one, I like the name more as well. My only issue is the way the third star shows up in the DC emblem, only a tiny corner piece of the star is showing. Maybe an oversight, but that's my only complaint. Nice work!I like how you incorporated the DC flag into the logo, but you should definitely fix the stars in the DC logo, since it looks strange and honestly a little sloppy to have 1/3 of a star visible. There is a very easy solution. Just lower the positioning of all the stars so that the right star is in the top right part of the C (that part that dips down), the middle star move down in roughly the same position but parallel to the right star, and the left star move down and left so it rests entirely visible in the left leg of the D. They can still all be equally distanced too. Pretty much just have them all run left to right where the top red stripe currently is. You will have to move the red stripes down and make them slightly thinner to fit, but the result will be much cleaner in my opinion. DesignsByHahn.com Behance Dribbble Instragram Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raysox Posted April 30, 2012 Author Share Posted April 30, 2012 I didn't even think of that! It's fixed and looks a lot better. Thanks, man.I was playing around with the idea of the circle bracket Conrad showed us in his thread, but here is a look at all the logos together! @MichaelDanger19 | Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drdougfresh Posted April 30, 2012 Share Posted April 30, 2012 Nice work on this one, I like the name more as well. My only issue is the way the third star shows up in the DC emblem, only a tiny corner piece of the star is showing. Maybe an oversight, but that's my only complaint. Nice work!I like how you incorporated the DC flag into the logo, but you should definitely fix the stars in the DC logo, since it looks strange and honestly a little sloppy to have 1/3 of a star visible. There is a very easy solution. Just lower the positioning of all the stars so that the right star is in the top right part of the C (that part that dips down), the middle star move down in roughly the same position but parallel to the right star, and the left star move down and left so it rests entirely visible in the left leg of the D. They can still all be equally distanced too. Pretty much just have them all run left to right where the top red stripe currently is. You will have to move the red stripes down and make them slightly thinner to fit, but the result will be much cleaner in my opinion.Great idea-- looks much better!And I'm digging the circular bracket-- more fun to look at than a standard one haha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raysox Posted April 30, 2012 Author Share Posted April 30, 2012 @MichaelDanger19 | Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lancealot Posted April 30, 2012 Share Posted April 30, 2012 Haha rivalries already i would suppourt exhibition (out of them two) just cause the logo looks cooler Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Burmy Posted April 30, 2012 Share Posted April 30, 2012 AMAZING...I would watch this derby in real life attentively, just like I would Patrie Montreal's with that Anglophone squad (I suggested Montreal Nomads) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RedSox44 Posted May 1, 2012 Share Posted May 1, 2012 Everything about this concept is unbelievably gorgeous, Raysox. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raysox Posted May 1, 2012 Author Share Posted May 1, 2012 Thanks fellas, I'll probably post these this week. To avoid confusion, Centre plays at the Air Canada Centre with the Leafs. Exhibition will be at Ricoh Coliseum which is at Exhibition Place, home of Toronto FC. @MichaelDanger19 | Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cody21 Posted May 1, 2012 Share Posted May 1, 2012 Thanks fellas, I'll probably post these this week. To avoid confusion, Centre plays at the Air Canada Centre with the Leafs. Exhibition will be at Ricoh Coliseum which is at Exhibition Place, home of Toronto FC.Don't the Marlies play at Ricoh? In the last game against Detroit, the time from ten minutes left to one minute left was probably the longest nine minutes of my life. But from one to zero was probably the greatest time I've ever had. I didn't want the clock to run out. It was such a great feeling: people crying in the stands, people jumping up and down, people cheering. Guys couldn't even sit up on the bench. It was probably the best minute of my life.Ah, the "I'm kidding" - the universal internet excuse for saying something that others perceived as dumb. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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