mcrosby Posted October 3, 2012 Author Share Posted October 3, 2012 MIssouri inspired alternate helmet: I used black for the facemask as I see it as a modern 'grey' facemask. If used correctly it can work as a neutral and not detract from the uniform. Green was too much green, red and yellow were too detracting from the rest of the helmet. Black it is. https://twitter.com/OutOfThisWC Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nuordr Posted October 3, 2012 Share Posted October 3, 2012 I love the normal and alternate helmet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pokecat12 Posted October 3, 2012 Share Posted October 3, 2012 Quick update to the wordmark...not sure how I feel about it.and a helmet: welcome to the NFL(concepts), matte.This is what is missing in the NFL. The Barcelona Dragons color scheme was sooooooooooo good and this just pops with the deep green helmet and the Bright red facemask. Well Done! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColeJ Posted October 3, 2012 Share Posted October 3, 2012 i agree. this concept is getting better and better. one of my favorites in a long while. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lee Noire Posted October 3, 2012 Share Posted October 3, 2012 The alt helmet is OK. I don't think it is any better than the regular one at all. The regular helmet is just spectacular. Another question for you mcrosby...what is that font called? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mcrosby Posted October 3, 2012 Author Share Posted October 3, 2012 The font is a hybrid of Davida Bold and Emmanuelle.Anyone have suggestions for uniforms before I get those started? https://twitter.com/OutOfThisWC Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GFB Posted October 3, 2012 Share Posted October 3, 2012 EDIT: Nevermind. Great work... Awesome helmet too, reminds me of the Barcelona Dragons. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
illwauk Posted October 3, 2012 Share Posted October 3, 2012 Quick update to the wordmark...not sure how I feel about it.Reduce the size of those "hanging balls" and you'll have an awesome wordmark. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saint Zephyr III Posted October 3, 2012 Share Posted October 3, 2012 I absolutely love the evolution of the logo; and the fact you still have teal, albeit a very dark version, is a great touch. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mcrosby Posted October 4, 2012 Author Share Posted October 4, 2012 First draft of a uniform: https://twitter.com/OutOfThisWC Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lee Noire Posted October 4, 2012 Share Posted October 4, 2012 The font is a hybrid of Davida Bold and Emmanuelle.Anyone have suggestions for uniforms before I get those started?Thanks, I love it!I'm torn on the uniform though. I'm not sure if it should be traditional or some kind of modern look. I do think the feathers would look nice on them in some capacity.Edit: I was too slow. I like them, especially the feathers and the LA on the pants. I would just move that Nike logo and go with a one color collar, either all white or all green. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheOneAndOnlyMau Posted October 4, 2012 Share Posted October 4, 2012 Wow. Im a little late to this party but absolutely awesome work on the logo and helmet! I love itAs for the uniform.... I think its an ok start but it needs some work. I get that theres some barcelona dragons inspiration here, but the uniform just looks waaaaayyy too NFL Europe to me. The mark and helmet are great for an NFL team but the uniform just needs to be a lot simpler. Nix the paint-bucket tool panel coloring and experiment with a unique, more modern stripe or something other than the feathers of the sleeves. The number font could be simpler and sleaker too... The mark is well done and somewhat classy (as is the wordmark) and i believe that a unique stripe or sleeve element the than the feather would do the brand a bit more justice. Just my opinion though. Again, great start but i think it needs a couple more iterations and "idea-dumps"keep 'em coming   Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Philsphan Posted October 4, 2012 Share Posted October 4, 2012 I completely disagree. These uniforms are fantastic and would be so refreshing next to teams that haven't changed their look in forever like the Niners and Raiders. I like the feathers on the sleeves too. The only thing is the dot in the zero. It looks fine on the A of LA on the pants but it doesn't work for the zero. Great work! Would love to see this team on the field Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hugevolsfan Posted October 4, 2012 Share Posted October 4, 2012 I love the uniforms except the pants I just like some sort of striping. Great job on this could go in my league for sure if not the NFL. My Fictional Football League Version 3 My Fictional Football Leagues WebsiteMy Church Website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
seancarter Posted October 4, 2012 Share Posted October 4, 2012 Jaguars aren't moving from Jacksonville anytime soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JPDesign Posted October 4, 2012 Share Posted October 4, 2012 ^LOLReally nice looking work so far. My only complaint so far is the font. I'm not sold on it yet, especially as a number font. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hockey week Posted October 4, 2012 Share Posted October 4, 2012 This is really, really impressive. I wish I would have taken a look at this sooner. Really incredible. The dot in the zero is brutal, or at least it will be for commentators. the rest is awesome, truly brilliant.Don't forget TV numbers! ...and the swooshes on the sleeves, you know Nike would never neglect those. I'll respect any opinion that you can defend. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mcrosby Posted October 4, 2012 Author Share Posted October 4, 2012 I figure that since the swoosh is on the front of the jersey (which the NFL doesn't allow blah blah blah) Nike would be okay with not interrupting the feathers on the sleeve. Here's an update. The green pants really make me think of Barcelona, which I love. I also updated the number font, added TV numbers, moved the LA monogram to the right...because I like it there. And the biggest change, a pant 'stripe' https://twitter.com/OutOfThisWC Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lee Noire Posted October 4, 2012 Share Posted October 4, 2012 Aside from those side panels and the collar this update looks good. The green pants work better than the white with a white Jersey and that stripe, while unorthodox, looks awesome. Are you going red Jersey/green pants for the other combo or green/white? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brave-Bird 08 Posted October 4, 2012 Share Posted October 4, 2012 Ditto. I'd say fix collar, get rid of side panels...and maybe remove one of the feathers from the sleeve to make it a tad less busy? Other than this is an amazingly unique and awesome concept. Especially love the pants! Excellent job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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