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My (Personal) Football League Redesign

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For the Hornets, I'd try a silver helmet.

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I'd remove the wordmark on the back of the jerseys and maybe make the helmet athletic gold. But everything else for the Tennessee Hornets looks pretty good.

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I like the secondary logo with the hornet image a lot. It's one of the most unique looking bee/hornets Ive seen. The atennas could be thinner in my mind, but it's minor and it's a sweet looking logo.

On the other logos though, the wings dont look like wings. It's the same issue I saw in the Claws logo. I couldnt tell the claws were in fact claws when they had no body. Here I cant tell the wings are wings unless I see them on a hornet. On the hornet body logo, the wings work because we all expect wings.

The font is ok, but at first glance it reminds me of Batman Forever font. I know it's not, but it's close.

I like the colors a lot. Youre really on a roll it seems at pumping out these latest teams. It's fun to follow.

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one more thing, I think that hornet body logo would look cool on the helmet if it were angled left to right (rather than straight up and down) and tilted slightly upward. But that's just because it's my favorite logo of this team so Im partial to seeing it on the helmet.

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I've been looking around this site for a while and I really love this thread. You've put a lot of effort into this concept and it looks great! That Longhorns set....wow!

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When is the next one gonna come? :rolleyes:

Hopefully, CJ is going to release the final two teams pretty soon. Not sure when, though.

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All of these are phenomenal.

If only this was an actual football league...

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All of these are phenomenal.

If only this was an actual football league...

I bet it would be more fun than the No Fun League.

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Yeah, fun and exciting pro football is all but dead now and college is gonna become NFL junior pretty soon. :censored:ty times :rolleyes:

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The hornet logos are, great, but the uniforms are just like the Chargers. Change it up a little bit and add a yellow or light blue alternate.

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All of these are phenomenal.

If only this was an actual football league...

I bet it would be more fun than the No Fun League.

Not to mention, a gazillion times better than the disappointment that is the United Football League (as in the REAL one, not the CCSLC fantasy league).

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Yeah the UFL was a dissapointment on the field and in the fashionwear department ;)

Makes the XFL look totally classic by comparison

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#31 St. Louis Rivermen

Up next: #32 San Francisco Bobcats

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This set seemed to take awhile for me to get started, simply because it's a complete franchise overhaul. My color pallette was immediately set to variations of the red-blue-yellow shades of the flag of St. Louis; I just felt that it fit the area well. The St. Louis Cardinals sport a similar red-navy-yellow combination in their logo package with fairly simple red and navy uniforms, as well. Historically, the team started off as the Deleware Tigers in '05 and later relocated to Detroit in '06. A year later, the team is moved and renamed the St. Louis Tigers, which lasted from 2008-2010, until the recent renaming. The new name for this team was actually suggested by JH42XCC (if I remember correctly), to represent the great Lewis and Clark expedition. Which brings me to the primary: a stylized adventurer with a racoon hat, typical attire for the expedition. This was a mark I was fairly pleased with and wanted to be the primary, but not used on the helmets. I wanted a simple and iconic look for a newly rebranded team, so I took some inspiration from the flag yet again. I used crossing telescopes in front of a fleur-de-lis on a circular shield, as used on the flag itself. THIS mark was used on the helmets.

The uniforms are loosely based on the old Los Angeles Avengers of the AFL, with red heavily used against navy. Other than that, I kept them pretty simple.

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One team left to post, and it's currently going through final revisions. What do you guys think?

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This is a beautiful concept. It is near pefect. The only think I might change is maybe gold piping/stripe on the white home pants. Otherwise, it is appealing, it looks classic yet a little bit different while evocing the flag. I like. I'm also very excited to see the final release!

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What an amazing concept!! Good work, man!

I would try putting the curved waterstroke below the wordmark as pants stripes. Might look interesting.

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Not a huge fan of this one. Too many elements, the colors don't work well, imho, and the uniform design just seems weird. That pants stripe? What? I reallllyyy don't like the "toothpaste" look of the underline on the script. Here's a thought for a color scheme, as seen in the recent Seahawks Uni Contest on UniWatch

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