eRay Posted February 12, 2006 Share Posted February 12, 2006 SChelmetproject: i like your name, wordmark, colors, and logos, but the jerseys aren't really complete to me. the home one is good, but i just think the away one needs to be tweaked.get rid of the vest, or vest look in the away. use the pinstripes on the away also, they work with the vertical look of the primary logo. the BP one is the best of the 3 in my opinion, but i wanna see a little more white in the jersey, just a little. nice work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Joshawaggie Posted February 12, 2006 Share Posted February 12, 2006 I've always wanted the Tampa Bay Devil Rays to shorten to just "Tampa Rays". Now if they do that, they could go another direction other than the sting ray: @josh_j12 CFA- Fargo Bobcats Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
joebass123 Posted February 13, 2006 Share Posted February 13, 2006 wilson: excellent concept. i completely agree that they should stick with rays but alter the interpretation of the team name. even going with something like the sun rays would be cool, i think. i like the colors, though i would personally go with just yellow/white. but i think the sun logo itself could be embellished and just tweaked a little bit. maybe something a little more busy perhaps? maybe along the lines of this...http://www.lightsourcegroup.com/_borders/Sun%20Logo.gifor something like what the hagerstown suns use...http://web.brandsoftheworld.com/brands/0005/8649/brand.gifanyway, great concept. i'm just throwing out ideas because i've been waiting for someone to do a conept like this and i have no cool imaging programs on my computer. www.joseflorenz.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
therocheapproach Posted February 13, 2006 Share Posted February 13, 2006 You may have seen the working process of this in a previous thread. I starting working this concept about a year ago and luckily they're now looking for a change. I sent a previous draft to the front office, but only heard back from a PR guy. I kept the name Tampa Bay Rays and stuck with the fish mascot, but changing the look to a more traditional and classic design. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TBGKon Posted February 13, 2006 Share Posted February 13, 2006 You may have seen the working process of this in a previous thread. I starting working this concept about a year ago and luckily they're now looking for a change. I sent a previous draft to the front office, but only heard back from a PR guy. I kept the name Tampa Bay Rays and stuck with the fish mascot, but changing the look to a more traditional and classic design. Just a comment: I really like your primary logo, but it seems like the word "RAYS" and the tailswoop get merged. Any way to differentiate the two would be a plus in my book. Also, I feel that the home jersey gives me too much of a Yankees vibe, what would the home jersey look like with the "RAYS" script? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
logodawg Posted February 13, 2006 Share Posted February 13, 2006 Just a comment: I really like your primary logo, but it seems like the word "RAYS" and the tailswoop get merged. Any way to differentiate the two would be a plus in my book. Also, I feel that the home jersey gives me too much of a Yankees vibe, what would the home jersey look like with the "RAYS" script?NOOOOO!!!!!!!Keep the home jersey the way it is. I don't see any Yankee vibe, if anything maybe the Tigers, but there big enough differences that it doesn't matter.I do agree about sperating the ray tail and "RAYS" I once had a car but I crashed it. I once had a guitar but I smashed it. I once, wait where am I going with this? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CityOfWalrus Posted February 13, 2006 Share Posted February 13, 2006 Is...is that the Thundercats logo? LOL Thundercats its not really that close to even looking like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwoRsAndTwoLs Posted February 13, 2006 Share Posted February 13, 2006 So am I understanding correctly that we can take C&C in here and work on our concepts? Every Fifth Day is a Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
logodawg Posted February 14, 2006 Share Posted February 14, 2006 So am I understanding correctly that we can take C&C in here and work on our concepts? Yes, you may change your entry up to the deadline, however you cannot post your entry in a different thread before entering. (With some exceptions, e.i. you posted before the contest was announced.) I once had a car but I crashed it. I once had a guitar but I smashed it. I once, wait where am I going with this? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shumway Posted February 14, 2006 Share Posted February 14, 2006 Here's the 3rd concept of a bird for the contest. I went with the pelican because it's on the St. Pete flag. I kept it Tampa Bay just for traditional purposes.EDIT/UPDATE: I added shoulder patchesConcept moved/updated...it's on the 5th page now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cola Posted February 14, 2006 Share Posted February 14, 2006 I think that is a good idea and concept as long as there aren't any upper management that graduated from FSU or UF- in that case, they would hate it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwoRsAndTwoLs Posted February 14, 2006 Share Posted February 14, 2006 Allright, I'll throw this into the hopper. Every Fifth Day is a Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shumway Posted February 14, 2006 Share Posted February 14, 2006 I think that is a good idea and concept as long as there aren't any upper management that graduated from FSU or UF- in that case, they would hate it. I actually thought about that. I originally had the green color as turquoise, but I really don't like that color, so I just made it darker and I iked how it turned out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
illinirox1 Posted February 14, 2006 Share Posted February 14, 2006 Shumway3319, those Pelicans unies are sharp, but all I can think about is Miami.The primary logo is really nice though. Put Your Hands up For Detroit (our lovely city) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pooter Posted February 14, 2006 Author Share Posted February 14, 2006 There are some really sweet entries. I'll keep my opinions to myself till after the voting.MAKE SURE THAT YOU KEEP YOUR ORIGINAL ARTWORK!!!!!I will need to contact the winners so you can e-mail me the design so I can have it done for the proper presentation, sized correctly, correct colors, etc. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BaltimoreFan Posted February 14, 2006 Share Posted February 14, 2006 I decided to do an entry.I also liked the idea of a team from the Flordia Area being called the Sharks. So thats what I decided to name the team. Please try to realize I used paint, so the hat logo isn't as nice I'd like for it to be. Also, because of paint, the logos on the hat and shoulders are a little bigger than I'd like for them to be. However if I made them any smaller they would have been distorted. Well here it is: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PackerBadger Posted February 14, 2006 Share Posted February 14, 2006 I'm not entering, but if I did, I would rename them (and do the concept for) the Tampico Stogies. (Bonus points to those who know that reference.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rmered Posted February 14, 2006 Share Posted February 14, 2006 Here's my go at it.A disclaimer.I like the name Dragons, but can't draw them, so I've used a clip art dragon.If this disqualifies me, so be it.Also. I don't have the vector version of the preferred template, so I've used the one available. If you can direct me to a version of it, I will use that one.As for the colours, I wanted to use a similar but different Sea Green, so this is a lighter shade. I've used Maroon to make them different from the Marlins. Oh, and I've got a site.Footy Jumpers Dot Com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pooter Posted February 14, 2006 Author Share Posted February 14, 2006 I'm not entering, but if I did, I would rename them (and do the concept for) the Tampico Stogies. (Bonus points to those who know that reference.) Wm Peterson from CSI played star player and manager, Stud' Cantrell in the movie Long Gone. But isn't Tampico in Mexico? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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