i am what i am Posted April 23, 2007 Share Posted April 23, 2007 I know its basic and its the 1st jersey I ever made but I wanna know what you think and by the way this was made in paint. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BBTV Posted April 23, 2007 Share Posted April 23, 2007 Wow, cool logos!Did you make those yourself? "The views expressed here are mine and do not reflect the official opinion of my employer or the organization through which the Internet was accessed." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
speedy Posted April 23, 2007 Share Posted April 23, 2007 First, credit John for the use of his logos. Second I know you said it's basic, but get some striping onto those sleeves, and add a little bit more blue to the hem. This looks awfully clean for paint..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KaTo Posted April 23, 2007 Share Posted April 23, 2007 I think I've seen this logos on here before but don't know where...The design looks good but you should, as speedy said, get striping on the sleeves. All in all, it's a very good start.KaTo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i am what i am Posted April 23, 2007 Author Share Posted April 23, 2007 I got the logos from http://newblueandgold.celsiusdesign.net/old/logos.html and Im very good when it comes to paint. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
officeglenn Posted April 23, 2007 Share Posted April 23, 2007 You've got a number on the front, but no numbers on the sleeves or name/number on the back? I've always felt that those things need to be on there before I can get a good feel for the concept. As is, it just looks incomplete.For what's there, though, I think you need more blue and less gold. Blue is the dominant colour in the logo while gold is the accent colour, so the use of the colours in the jersey should reflect that. I think you got it right on the shoulder yokes, but nowhere else. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kewp80 Posted April 23, 2007 Share Posted April 23, 2007 I can't see it. Cardinals -- Rams -- Blues -- Tigers -- Liverpool Check out my music! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i am what i am Posted April 23, 2007 Author Share Posted April 23, 2007 I hope you like the update on the jersey and if you cant see it visit this url http://img49.imageshack.us/img49/792/buffalobm4.png Credit to John Slabyk for the Logos Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FlyersHockey1967 Posted April 23, 2007 Share Posted April 23, 2007 Never use anyone else's logos without their permission and without crediting them in your post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SG30 Posted April 23, 2007 Share Posted April 23, 2007 Ok, the one thing here is that you NEED to give credit for your logos if you take them from someone else. Otherwise you'll be called out on it for stealing.Moving on, I'd suggest implementing more gold and adding a shoulder patch.Other than that, very well done. Especially for your first concept. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jezus_Ghoti Posted April 23, 2007 Share Posted April 23, 2007 Im very good when it comes to paint.You have a long way to go, kid. Decent start, but it's nothing special. Focus on originality. Anyone can fill in blank templates with horizonal stripes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
charger77 Posted April 23, 2007 Share Posted April 23, 2007 Not to be a dick, but its really Toronto Maple Leaf Alt-esque.Going by the last two Sabre jerseys you should do an original striping pattern, something not seen in the league.Dan PotD May 11th, 2011looooooogodud: June 7th 2010 - July 5th 2012 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i am what i am Posted April 23, 2007 Author Share Posted April 23, 2007 Yet another update but I dont have a shoulder patch but I like how it looks tell me what you think...again and credit to John Slabyk for the Logos. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kewp80 Posted April 23, 2007 Share Posted April 23, 2007 It looks pretty good, kinda plain and boring, like the others said you should try to do something creative. You also need a shoulder patch, that should make it better IMO.BTW you should use the swift template since that is what they will be using. Cardinals -- Rams -- Blues -- Tigers -- Liverpool Check out my music! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AsM29 Posted April 23, 2007 Share Posted April 23, 2007 no its the edge template... the swift jerseys are those hideous things that nike put out in the olympics that all look exactly the same... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i am what i am Posted April 23, 2007 Author Share Posted April 23, 2007 I got an idea how about we make a Buffalo project we could come up with logos colors whatever we want. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kewp80 Posted April 23, 2007 Share Posted April 23, 2007 no its the edge template... the swift jerseys are those hideous things that nike put out in the olympics that all look exactly the same...Right, what I meant, brain-fart, sorry.I got an idea how about we make a Buffalo project we could come up with logos colors whatever we want.huh? Cardinals -- Rams -- Blues -- Tigers -- Liverpool Check out my music! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MVP Posted April 23, 2007 Share Posted April 23, 2007 Put the small "b" secondary logo as a shoulder patch. Might look good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i am what i am Posted April 23, 2007 Author Share Posted April 23, 2007 The Buffalo Jersey Project is anyone who wants to help make a bunch of jerseys, logos and new colors that you think would look good on a Buffalo jersey. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ProvidenceRI Posted April 24, 2007 Share Posted April 24, 2007 Ok, the one thing here is that you NEED to give credit for your logos if you take them from someone else. Otherwise you'll be called out on it for stealing.Moving on, I'd suggest implementing more gold and adding a shoulder patch.Other than that, very well done. Especially for your first concept.Why? Nobody credits the logo designers on other concepts. I don't know who designed the original Bruins logo. Should I credit him if I do a Bruins concept?He said it was a jersey concept, not a logo concept. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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