Billy B Posted December 3, 2008 Share Posted December 3, 2008 I like all you?ve done so far, but one thing is bugging me about the Warriors. On the ?ball W? logo, the lines on the basketball end when they meet the W. Try to keep those lines going on the other side of the W and it will look great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TalktoChuck Posted December 3, 2008 Share Posted December 3, 2008 The lakers are a great improvent to their currents. I agree with you that the Lakers in white doesn't fly. While the white uni's are stylish, they don't fit into the Laker identity IMO. I love that you have the side panels match on both uni's. You can never go wrong when you match! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheRealPepman Posted December 3, 2008 Share Posted December 3, 2008 Heat: Blazing fire. Wow!Warriors: Classic!Lakers: Hate the design. Not in the time. Just use the oldies. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BJBerthiaume Posted December 3, 2008 Share Posted December 3, 2008 I like the Lakers concept. You kept it simple, which is one of the toughest things to do when making a concept, and I applaud you. I am one of those people who like classic jerseys more than modern jerseys, so nice job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TalktoChuck Posted December 3, 2008 Share Posted December 3, 2008 Heat: Blazing fire. Wow!Warriors: Classic!Lakers: Hate the design. Not in the time. Just use the oldies.First if all you really need to work on grammar. Your sentences don't make any sense. And second, if he used the style they currently use, that wouldn't be a "redesign" would it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elliott Posted December 3, 2008 Author Share Posted December 3, 2008 Concept 15: SunsSO...I wanted to show you the evolution of this design. I think it is sort of cool the way it has progressed.Draft 1: This was a concept I did back in February. I liked the direction I was going so I decided to bring it back, attempting to make it better, for my newest concept. Looks like I had that template all along chesnutz, haha.Draft 1Draft 2: So this was the one I was going to originally do for my redesign as I was planning it, so it's about 2 or 3 months old, I didn't like it after I had made it, so I immediately scrapped it. Still, I saved it. I tried to use the old style wordmarks, and come up with a modern design, while adding a little gray. I still don't like it, at all.Draft 2Draft 3: Then I remembered my first Suns concept, so I wanted to re-do it. I dropped a lot of the light orange. It's subtle for sure. I think it's pretty good but not anything special. I don't like the purple stripe that appears on the white jersey, and the abrupt way that it rounds off.Draft 3Draft 4 = Concept 15Well, I went back to the drawing board a little, obviously I had to get it on the new template so a revamp was in order. I used way more light orange here. I do like the way it came out, but it is...different, so I would see why you wouldn't like it.But I hope you do like it. Thanks for C+C.And, more Lakers comment would be nice.I really don't know who I will do next, some are already made, but any requests are welcome, maybe I have it done. I have ideas sketched out for pretty much every team so I might do any request even if I don't have it done. Dribbble ... Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aci Posted December 3, 2008 Share Posted December 3, 2008 I like the side panels on the Suns jerseys. They flow very nicely, but they may have been the answer to your Heat concept more than the Suns, though. I suppose both team names are associated with flames, but that design definitely brings the Heat to my mind first. I would imagine the whole concept would look excellent on the court. Hamilton Eagles- 2012 and 2013 Continental Hockey League Champions! 2011, 2012, 2013, 2014 & 2015 CHL East Division Champions! Niagara Dragoons- 2012 United League and CCSLC World Series Champions! 2012, 2013, 2014 and 2015 UL Robinson Division Champions! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TalktoChuck Posted December 3, 2008 Share Posted December 3, 2008 I love it!! The suns current sets bore me. These are a huge improvement!! Great job as always Elliot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chestnutz Posted December 4, 2008 Share Posted December 4, 2008 These are my favorite. Love the jerseys, I'd buy one in a heartbeat. erikas | go birds | dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigmike Posted December 4, 2008 Share Posted December 4, 2008 I don't like the Suns but man are those beautiful, I have to say this is deffinately the best set so far! Check out my new NFL 2016 Series! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BJBerthiaume Posted December 4, 2008 Share Posted December 4, 2008 Wow, that Suns set is amazing. I would buy those shorts they are so cool. Great job on those. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mania Posted December 4, 2008 Share Posted December 4, 2008 Drop the oval behind the numbers (which doesn't look good on the Suns current set or here) and make the numbers 2 layer, with an orange outline on each, and the set will be just about perfect. Off The Top Rope: A Pro Wrestling Podcast Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dgthree Posted December 4, 2008 Share Posted December 4, 2008 I really like the suns. The rest are decent, but this set made me say I need to post and its a quality set. Unique, Bold, but realistic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bohob Posted December 4, 2008 Share Posted December 4, 2008 I agree with bruschimania on the oval, it just doesn't fit with the rest of the concept. I would also like to see an outline on the wordmarks / numerals. They seem bare. The side stripe works well, but it seems weird going downward, maybe have it go upwards and only on the shorts (with something else as the side stripe for the jersey). Good stuff though. NHL 2016 by Bowen Hobbs * BOHOB's MLB Redesign Project * MiLB Re-Brands * NCAA Football Concepts Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SkinsWizStangs Posted December 4, 2008 Share Posted December 4, 2008 I would love to see a wizards one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
incrediballer Posted December 4, 2008 Share Posted December 4, 2008 Draft 3 is pretty nice. This might work for the '09 AllStar game, w/ some modifications.Draft 4? Whew! Probably the best among your 15 sets so far. But I'd love to see if the oval would be dropped. LakeshowFight On!Carpe DiemNo Fear Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eRay Posted December 4, 2008 Share Posted December 4, 2008 I must say, the Suns concept is amazing. As others have said, I would try dropping the oval, and making the numbers 2 color. Also, I am worried about how the name "Stoudemire" would fit on the back. Don't get me wrong, they look amazing, but that problem would be brought up if these were made in real life. And IMO they deserve to be. Keep it going. I'd love to see the Spurs. You have been doing some pretty colorful teams, it would be good to see what you do with Black, White, and Silver. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dgnmrwrw Posted December 4, 2008 Share Posted December 4, 2008 Really love the color choices for the Suns. They really make all the elements pop. Jerseys are very good too, especially the road jersey. Fantastic. HURRICANES | PANTHERS | WHITE SOX | WOLFPACK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elliott Posted December 4, 2008 Author Share Posted December 4, 2008 Here is the update, I listened to your suggestions. Thanks for everyone's comments.I still don't know which one I will post next, so I will just surprise you! Dribbble ... Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Delux247 Posted December 4, 2008 Share Posted December 4, 2008 Great job on the Suns'. I think if you tighten the flowing panel around the arm/chest area it would look better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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